SCRIPT CONSULTANCY

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“Phil offered us a refreshingly honest approach in his feedback which has allowed us to unlock new depth to our characters and narrative that we hadn't considered before. He outlays his thoughts concisely and leaves you under no illusion as to what steps you need to take to improve. He even took the time to go beyond simply saying that something didn't work by offering alternatives as well. 

 

“The world of scriptwriting can be overwhelming and the thought of rewriting even more so. But with Phil's guidance and help, it has made the prospect not only necessary but fun as well. As first time writers, the sheer amount of consultants out there offering their expertise in exchange for vast amounts of money can be off-putting but do not fear - Philmscribe.com is a diamond hidden in the rough and Phil will continue to be our first port of call for as long as we continue on our journey in the world of screenwriting.” 

 

Nick Deal and Jakob Lewis Barnes – Sheffield, UK

“Secrets”

 

 

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“I approached Phil after he sent encouraging words on social media during my MA Creative Writing dissertation. His in-depth analysis really helped me fine-tune my screenwriting. Phil provided me with more concise feedback than I received through my whole master’s degree, which will not only help me to improve my screenplay, but will also improve my future projects. I can't recommend Phil enough if you are serious about improving your writing.”

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Michaela Hunter – Falkirk, Scotland

“Cursed Earth”

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“I used Phil's Mid Shot service and would do so again. He was a pleasure to deal with and got it back to me ahead of schedule. The analysis provided a lot of clarity regarding larger issues like character and theme. He balanced precise criticism with words of encouragement. I also appreciated the forensic attention to detail with spelling and grammar. I'd highly recommend.”

 

Helen Johnson – Dublin, Ireland

"Sandymount Murders" pilot

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“Putting your script up on the coverage chopping block can be intimidating. 
Thankfully, Philmscribe takes that fear right out of the way. Even a Snap Read provides careful, thoughtful, and extremely insightful feedback on issues you haven't been able to see in your script.

 

“His suggestions are always clear, which makes it easier to go back and address those issues. His feedback inspires, never discourages. I walked away feeling confident and now look forward to the next rewrite. And that was just the Snap Read!

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“I've had feedback from contests, but it was not as thorough as Philmscribe's.
It's difficult to find someone you can trust with your script. I am so thrilled I have found such a trustworthy home for mine.”

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Persephone Vandegrift – Montana, USA

writer/producer

"The Water King"

 

 

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“Phil was efficient, professional and gave specific and constructive feedback on my script which I've found extremely helpful. I was given a clear sense of direction and couldn't wait to get started on the rewrite. Phil is clearly passionate about his work and very experienced, I felt my story was in very safe hands.”

 

Kate Pinato – Essex, UK

Journalist, Social Media Manager & Screenwriter

"Crackpots", "Taking Hold", "Gaining Glory"

"Hey! Presto", "Dragon Tales"

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“With English being my second language, it's even more difficult to break into Hollywood. But Philmscribe's services have helped me with this. I have also been really impressed with his analyses of my scripts, one of which has gone on to win a competition. Philmscribe has real experience when it comes to screenwriting. I look forward to working with him again in the future.”

 

Dumitru Ursu – Northampton, UK

“Envelope”

“Photo Man” - Best Screenplay, Hollywood Boulevard Film Festival, 2020

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“Phil has a great talent, a natural feeling for words that you can't really learn at school. He questions everything – a perfectionist in all ways. And this helped me so much with the content of my books and audiobooks.”

 

Alexandra Pichler – Dornbirn, Austria

Coach & Author

"Mindsetting Books for Children"

"Fridolin" book series

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“Phil offers very reasonable prices, with the Snap Read providing more pages than I expected.  Comments have given me some new ideas to develop the script and highlighted some key areas where I need to improve. Would certainly recommend Phil.”

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Russell Nelson – Newcastle, UK

“The Fundraiser” - SF, Reel Writers 2014; SF, Marquee Lights 2014 & Hot 100 Capital Fund

QF, WeScreenplay

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“I highly recommend the Snap Read service before you submit your screenplay anywhere. This is the real deal. The detail and quality of feedback was far greater than I expected and has helped tremendously on getting my screenplay ready to send out to producers.

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“Even if you have a manager or agent, I would still advocate you add this guy to your team. The focus of his feedback will help your script by leaps and bounds.  I will be utilizing his services in the future and will stay in touch throughout my writing career.”

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Michael Dodd – Seattle, USA

"Bloodline" 

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“Phil Clarke provided insightful feedback on my screenplay and helped me bring the script to the next level. He is able to see the big picture while maintaining his focus on the details, so that his feedback works to make sure the screenplay hits its emotional character beats while maintaining an engaging pace. I certainly look forward to future feedback from Phil and highly recommend him as a script consultant.”

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Justin Sloan – San Francisco, USA

Optioned screenwriter of "Found on Fuji" 

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“I’ve used Phil’s ‘Snap Read’ service for a number of scripts. He packs in a lot of story analysis in this basic service and his screenplay formatting comments are extremely useful. Phil’s friendly and knowledgeable script consulting offers a valuable insight into further drafts and the craft of screenwriting.  If you're prepared to put in the work, Philmscribe's script notes will elevate your screenwriting to the next level.”

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Katherine King – UK

Filmmaker

"Night of the Vampires"  "The Blood Between Us"
"No One Lives Here"

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“Phil performed a Snap Read on my script that helped enormously and made me review the overall idea and each individual part in a different and more interesting way. His feedback was so good that it was able to encourage me, yet be honest enough to tell me which things were not working and what it was about them that I needed to develop. Worth every penny and I will definitely work with him on my second draft.”

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Barbie Kelly – Brighton, UK

Writer/Producer
www.pokerfaceproductions.co.uk

"I Want To Be Pretty"

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“I can highly recommend Phil. He gives constructive and honest feedback. After his comments on my pilot I feel I am able to make it much stronger. Very happy and will definitely use his services again.”

 

Rachael Howard – Cumbria, UK

www.rachaelhoward.co.uk

"The Gate"

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“This was the second time I've used Philmscribe. Once again it was money well spent as I received a thorough examination of an early draft - exactly what I needed.

It is always great to have another pair of eyes read the script, especially eyes that are perceptive and helpful in what works/doesn't work. And this has provided me with many areas to focus on during the next draft. Thanks Phil!”

 

Ashley Walton – Retford, Notts, UK

"Not If You Were The Last Man" - "Manes"

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“I strongly recommend Philmscribe's One Sheet service. His honest and frank views opened my eyes to problems in my script I would never have spotted. I now have a clear view on how to move forward and will be coming back to Phil for more help.”

 

Kenny O'Connell – Liverpool, UK

Musician/Song & Script Writer

'I'll Be Waiting' featured in "Murder Story" starring Christopher Lee

“Part Vampire” – "Hoodie and the High Rip Gang" – "Civvy Street"

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“It's not enough to have a story, characters and dialogue, to show, not tell, to 'hit the beats' or even to make readers eagerly turn 120 pages. A writer still needs a detail-oriented analyst who sees every visible flaw and every intangible omission. His comprehensive reports prove he really cares about making you a better writer. Anyone would benefit from the consulting services Phil Clarke offers, at a level of professionalism not available anywhere else.”

 

Frances Forte – Boston, USA

"Motherland"

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“As someone new to writing, I had been looking for someone to review my feature length script independently, as I had recently received a scathing report from the film board. And as it formed part of an independent project which already had lead cast and a director attached, I sought advice from someone who had industry experience of working on large commercially successful productions. I was also seeking a consultant who could offer objective advice about the script regardless of their own personal tastes.

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“Phil Clarke's personal 'Snap Read' service was very professional and also greatly appreciated, because it allowed me to review my script with objectivity and direct my efforts towards making overall improvements to the script's tone and structure without having to sacrifice its originality.”

Topher Neville – Mayo, Ireland

Independent Filmmaker - "I Love London"

Associate Producer/Co-Writer - "Let The Shows Begin"

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“When asked to write an honest recommendation of Phil's services, I realised it wasn't as simple as praising his abilities as a script doctor. He's helped me to understand what type of writer I am. 

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“Whether he knows it or not, Phil's invaluable feedback has given me confidence in my writing abilities, and a drive to continue on my script-writing journey. This has also translated to the novel I've been writing for some time.

 

“With constant correspondence, I have come to believe equally in his praise and suggestions on improvement as a genuine truth. To me, he is my mentor and my bullshit meter who writes in-depth analysis helping me to look at my script through fresh eyes seeing new possibilities. He's genuinely interested in what I'm doing, and constantly checks in with where my writing is at between consultations. He has kept me accountable for the one job I hate doing: editing.

 

“Simply put, Phil is the best of the best. He's my go-to person for real feedback and professional insight into the film industry, helping me walk through many doors I wouldn't have otherwise been able to.  I'm looking forward to utilising his talents on many other scripts in the future.”

 

Sarah Rose – Australia

Actress & screenwriter

"Hidden Melodies"

 

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“Phil’s Snap Reads on two of my scripts proved to be an unexpected surprise; his involvement felt more like a writing partner’s helping hand than a typical script consultant service.

 

“His analyses on both scripts were sincere, thorough and precise; his overall tone and approach honest, friendly and dedicated. He commends you on your writing strengths without blowing smoke. He highlights your flaws and provides clear and solid improvements that need to be made to achieve your goals.

 

“If you wish to enhance your craft and grow as a writer, put your trust in Phil. He’ll help you the way he knows best: giving you honest and in-depth assistance.”

 

Pag Kravvas – London, UK

Writer-Director

"A Beast In Heaven" – "A Good Way To A Private Hell"

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“I would recommend Phil’s consulting services to anyone hoping to advance their project to the next level. His experiences are admirable, his insights are keen and his follow up and recommendations are always received in a timely and professional manner.

 

“Bottom line: If you are at an uncertain place with your project and you just need that extra positive and constructive nudge in the right direction, do not hesitate and bring Philmscribe on board to make things tight.”

 

Ray Dainton – Chicago, USA

actor & screenwriter

"In The Paint" well-reviewed on TriggerStreet

 

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“Phil offers a super script consultancy service. It's thorough and efficient and the attention to detail – right down to typos – is very reassuring.  It's never easy to hear criticism but Phil is always constructive and suggests ideas in a productive manner. And it's worked for me! Thank you. Now I just need to get this next script written!”

 

Farrah Boutier – London, UK

US Attorney & Writer

"Highborn", "Pogerolla"

 

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“I’ve worked with Phil on two occasions. He´s a joy to work with, he´s fast, efficient and accurate – a real pro! I highly recommend working with him.”

 

Maria Östlund – Stockholm, Sweden

"The Switch" & "Break of Day" in development

 

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“Phil Clarke is an extremely confident and talented individual who takes great pride and care to deliver a host of analysis and feedback reports to upcoming writers. His script consulting is one – if not the best – I've come across. Phil offers a splendid service that's very affordable to new writers trying to hone and learn their craft.

 

“I have received plenty of feedback from Phil in the last twelve months and it's been nothing short of sensational. It's awe-inspiring to read and have never needed to go to another script consultant as I trust him as someone who can help me become a writer to eventually breakthrough into the TV industry.

 

“What makes me go back to Phil is not only his consulting but his general demeanour as a gentleman and a top friend to have a chat with. I truly believe he'll have a great record in the future of upcoming writers breaking into the film and TV industry.

 

“So if you ever fancy a chance at writing something based on a idea that's been lurking for many a year, transform it into a screenplay and contact Phil. I've never looked back and I'm so proud to call him not only a consultant but a man that I can trust with my work. His services have made me a better writer than I ever thought I could be.” 

 

Ryan Bridgewood – Essex, UK

"The Day of Peer Pressure" (short) produced, shown at Southend Film Festival

"Brothers of Namef" TV series in works

 

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“Phil Clarke has been an inspiration since the beginning of my screenwriting journey. 

Not only is Phil supportive, eager to assist and easy to talk to, but he has shown me time and time again that he is willing to go above and beyond what is expected of him as a script consultant for all of his clients.  He's more than a consultant, he's a friend.  Personally, I refer to him as Script Dr. Phil because he has all the right answers!”

 

Jessie Dyck – Alberta, Canada

"Mr Price"

 

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“Being a newbie to the game, I asked Phil for the Snap Read so that I could gauge if I was heading in the right direction or not. His response was both constructive and honest and sadly agreed with my inner critic. Obviously, I was hoping for a "You're a genius", but c'est la vie. The report also showed that an aspect I had been weak at and working on, was far stronger now, which was encouraging in itself. In summary: good value, thoughtfully written and insightful. Would highly recommend.”

 

Wendy Jones – Herefordshire, UK

"Ripples in the Pond"

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“While searching Twitter for someone who could help me in my burgeoning screenwriting career, I came across Phil who kindly said he'd read my latest draft of "Necessary Evil".  After talking to him, I soon discovered that he'd worked on several feature films and quickly realised that this was a guy who knew what he was doing.

 

“He came back to me with some great notes on the structure and pacing of my script, particularly the ending which I knew wasn't quite there yet and he gave me a lot of food for thought. It's always helpful to have another pair of eyes on your script and I can't recommend Phil highly enough.”

 

David L. Stokes – Wigan, UK

"Necessary Evil" optioned by Zed Filmworks, production due 2015

 

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“Philmscribe is my first stop whenever I complete a script. You will trust his professionalism and appreciate his honesty. Don't bother spending an outrageous amount of money on coverage by an amateur or someone who isn't in the business. Philmscribe offers an amazing service for a more amazing price.”

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Ryan Snelling – Kentucky, USA

 writer of "The Howling Dark" & host of Filmbeef.com podcast

 

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“After purchasing the Snap Read I was thrilled to get such a comprehensive analysis of my script with over ten pages of notes, covering everything from dialogue and scene descriptions to a detailed analysis of each character. Phil highlighted all the strengths and weaknesses and gave me advice on how to tighten up and improve crucial elements, which has been extremely valuable in helping me to further develop my script and take it to the next level.”

 

Andrew Gilbert – Bedfordshire, UK

Writer – Producer – Director

"Fly Trap"

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Phil Clarke’s insight is exactly what I needed to take the next steps in my script’s evolution. If he were a tool he would be a telescope, spotting the problems on the horizon, and a microscope, able to examine the detail. His analysis is surgical in its precision in adhering to storytelling principles, but has the passion and zeal that understands the  creative desire to defy the rules. He knows when breaking the rules works and when it doesn’t.

 

“A script analysis from Philmscribe helped my script go from no interest to having now been read by an Academy® nominated screenwriter and Producer and garnered interest by a major broadcaster.”

 

John Nikolakopoulos – Sydney, Australia

"Best of Men" (interest from ABC-Australia as TV series) 

 

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“I'll always be grateful to you Phil for the feedback you gave on my original screenplay, "Secret Elizabeth."  The detail and professionalism you used in providing me with invaluable advice on how to make my script the best it can be was clear, honest and reflective of the thorough understanding you have about just what kind of quality is required for any script to be completed and presented at the highest level.”

 

Adam C. Fisk – Alberta, Canada

"Secret Elizabeth" Top 20 of 2001 New Century Writer Awards competition

Submitted script for Universal’s Emerging Writers Fellowship

 

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“When Phil finished looking at my script, it became pretty clear what I needed to take out, what I should put in, and it made the script more crisp in terms of the read.  He did a bang up job. 

 

“Frankly, if I hadn't have sent him the script, I don't think it would have made it this far.  For that, I am always indebted to Philmscribe. When I get done writing my latest script, I will certainly forward it to him as he’s become my go to guy.  He is my SCRIPT WHISPERER, you could say!”

 

Richard Gustason – Colorado, USA

Comedian & writer of "Holy Ultimatum" 

 

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“I got to a point in my script where I couldn’t see what was and wasn't working any more, and it was driving me bonkers. Phil gave me a mammoth-sized 60-page report detailing exactly what was working, what needed work, and what needed cutting out completely.

 

“Without Phil’s constructive criticism, his knowledge and his honesty, my script wouldn’t be where it is now: in a much better place than it was before he got his hands on it. I’d recommend Phil to any screenwriter, regardless of level. You’ll be glad you did, and it won’t cost you the earth.”

 

Daley Francis – Loughborough, UK

"The Night Force"

 

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“Phil's Analysis Service is a detailed report on absolutely all components of your script.

From grammar to character description, from formatting to why the ending works or does not work. It not only made things clearer regarding my script, but gave me elements to improve my writing. Just like a screenwriting class would do.”

 

Delia Mazzocchi – Zurich, Switzerland

Writer. Translator.

"Thirst for Justice" - Nominee, Zurich Film Festival 2016
"Who’s Stronger?" – "Christmas Gift"

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“Exceptional service at a fantastic price! I hired Phil for his A&A service and to be completely honest I was surprised by everything. He works fast, so the screenplay came back quickly. The annotation part of the service immediately put my mind at ease, reassuring me that he’d undoubtedly read every page and not just gave it the five-and-dime treatment. The feedback report was also detailed and in-depth.

“As a new screenwriter working on my first screenplay, his A&A service has proven invaluable. I have learnt a lot from it and I now have the tools to progress my writing and give my career the best start possible.

“For me, one of the best things about Phil is that he always gives you the time you need, through his services and answering all my questions. I could not recommend him highly enough, he’s my go-to-guy from now on, and the first and only name I would recommend.”

Charlotte Browne – Swansea, UK
Author and Screenwriter

“The Prince of Algeisha: Flight of the Prince”

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“After I finished my first screenplay, which I had written in a foreign language, I was looking for a native speaker to proofread and to make sure, it doesn't sound odd to a reader. I was also seeking for a professional writer with profound knowledge of the movie business to give me feedback on plot, character development and so on.

 

“I ran into Phil on Twitter. Call it intuition, sixth sense - I knew I could trust Phil from the start. He performed his ANALYSIS service for me and turned in 45 pages of feedback. I was like - WOW! It was way more than I expected and to this extent almost priceless. Looking forward to having him perform another service for me. Phil is 100 %. Trust me!”

 

Valentin Wuebben – Bonn, Germany

"Dead End"

 

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“You were absolutely fantastic with every facet of editing my script. Being a new writer with not so tough a hide for critique, your consulting provided a fresh perspective without discouraging me. You went above and beyond with regards to answering any questions I might have with any of the edits you provided. All in all it was an experience that made me a better writer and I am very grateful to have found you.”

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Whitney Simonsen – Yorkton, Canada

"Fault Lies"

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“Having met Phil via social media, I soon found out that he is truly at the top of his game with his thorough, thoughtful, in-depth feedback. He understands story, understands the industry, and knows what it takes to write an 'industry ready' script.

 

“His analysis not only made my script much stronger, but also helped me to improve my skill set as a writer. I got much more bang for my buck than other 'industry pros' I have previously scouted. I can’t recommend him highly enough.”

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Scott Edwards – Stourbridge, UK

"Safe and Sound"

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“As an aspiring screenwriter working on my third script, I was searching for a script consultant  who would provide me with more than the usual generic feedback or numerical grades. I contacted Phil Clarke and it was the best decision I could have made. Phil’s in-depth analysis blew me away. His honest and constructive feedback not only improved my script but has made me a better screenwriter.  If you’re looking for a superbly thorough and affordable script analysis, contact Phil.”

 

Joshua Lippert – USA

"Redemption City"

 

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“Mad value for your money when you go to Philmscribe!
Feedback is concise and neatly divided into the crucial areas so that you will have such a stronger understanding of where your issues and your strengths lie. Responses with such incredible attention to detail that, trust me, if you’re doing something wrong, Philmscribe will see it. I don’t think I ever want to tackle a next draft again until Philmscribe has had his say.”

 

Rebecca Jean-Carroll – London, UK

Screenwriter

"The Family Way"

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“Phil helped out a newbie screenwriter like me with really good pointers and direction. His advice was golden and I'll take his notes with me on my screenwriting journey from now on!”

 

Tobias Svenlöv – Gothenburg, Sweden

"The Dark Memories"

 

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“I have worked with Phil for many years now and have always found he excelled in both his writing and editing, taking great pride to make sure he gives you the best possible service. You can rest assured you are in capable hands.”

 

Vivian Foster – East Sussex, UK

Writer, Editor & Book Designer – www.bookscribe.co.uk

 

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“Phil's feedback was spot on the money, and helped me understand what I didn't like about the script – sometimes you just get too close to see it yourself. The script received several other pieces of industry feedback since then, and every point Phil made has been echoed by others. Therefore I'd definitely consider Phil for script analysis.”

 

Ben Spencer – Manchester, UK

"Pleiades"

 

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“Phil gets to the heart of your script and offers concrete ways to improve it in ways I couldn't have imagined before. His experience, wit and knowledge will be a tremendous asset to any project!”

 

Michael Hager – Ventura, USA

"Red vs. Blue"

 

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“I am really really happy with the feedback you gave me. It was very informative and incredibly useful. It also highlighted issues which I know I should have picked up on but didn't (maybe due to being too close to it). Your services are definitely worth every penny and then some. You should charge more (although please don't).  I will certainly be coming back to you with the rewrite of "Dreams of a Life" and with my new idea, I'm very excited to see how it goes.”

 

James Hutton – Derbyshire, UK

"Dreams of a Life"

 

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“Phil's feedback came at a very early stage in the development of my very first feature length screenplay. Without his guidance I would almost certainly have continued up what was fast becoming a blind alley. He helped me change my story for the better and set me off on course for a project that was immeasurably important in the continuation and improvement of my career as a writer. Like most I learned more from my first feature than any project which came before, thanks to Phil one of the most important of those lessons was when to swallow your pride and ask for help.”

 

Steve Staff – Norfolk, UK

Media Production graduate & screenwriter/filmmaker

Earned BBC Writers Room placement

"Fences" featured at Freedom Film Festival

 

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“I didn't think it was possible to get a useful coverage report until I went to Phil.  He didn't just tell me what wasn't working, he explained his opinion and made himself available to answer any questions I had – that's a priceless service because the truth hurts. Being able to talk to Phil helped me clarify what he was saying rather than placing my own emotional interpretation on his words.  His personalized service is worth every penny.”

 

Sarah Walker – Cambridgeshire, UK

"Masquerade" & "Holly Blossums"

QF, Screenwriting Goldmine

 

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“Even though it was the basic read I had bought, he identified the weaknesses in my screenplay in an easy to read, succinct report. The summary of format and grammar errors at the end gave me a nice little ‘to do’ list for my future re-drafts.

 

“The report was always constructive and positive and he was more than willing to discuss points afterwards – I couldn’t get back to work on it quick enough! His past experience speaks for itself and I would recommend this service to anybody who wants a second pair professional eyes on their screenplay.”

 

Dan Sunley – Yorkshire, UK

"The Family Upstairs" - SF, Screenwriting Goldmine 2014

 

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“After finally finishing my screenplay, I knew I needed a critique but I didn't know who to turn to. Phil contacted me via Twitter and offered me his services for a very reasonable price. His notes were great and very detailed (I knew he took the time to read each page). I then used his notes to write a final draft and submit it to two festivals. Thanks, Phil, for taking me to the next step.”

 

Nicole Conners – USA

"The Revelations of John" 

Honorable Mention - The London Film Awards 2014

3rd place Screenwriter of the Month - 12mff.com August 2015

Semi-Finalist - APM Short Script Competition 2015

 

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“Phil Clarke was kind enough to help me with my scripts, which are always in desperate need of a second look, since I started learning everything on my own and still have room to grow.”

 

Aleece Reynaga - Los Angeles, USA

"New Girl" TV spec script

 

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“Having submitted a cherished film script of mine, I can promise that what you get from Phil at Philmscribe is integrity.  He does what we ask of him – thoroughly.  He analyses the writing and highlights exactly what’s needed to make it saleable and watchable.  Sometimes this may mean an ego takes a buffeting, maybe the ego will be polished like Aunty’s silver candlesticks but, either way, you’ll get a detailed breakdown of the script from start to finish.

 

“I really felt that Phil had taken the time and applied his expertise to the whole piece, not just skimmed over it and applied trite rules from a book.  Phil works with passion and integrity and that’s not a bad vehicle to help get you into film.”

 

Chris Wright – London, UK

"Kids" shortlisted for the Northern Film School Short Competition 2015

"The Bewley Brothers"

 

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“This man knows his craft. After sending in an unfinished script, still in its first draft, he professionally tore into it and returned its carcass to me with a ream of suggestions and alterations that, once acted on, turned a pumpkin into a platinum sedan.”

 

Julian Good – Margate, UK

artist & screenwriter of "Geoff"

 

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“After writing my first script I thought it was sure to be a hit, but to be sure I needed a second opinion. Now I could take it to a family member and they'd say, "Great job. Keep it up, kid." Or any friend would tell me, "Yea, it's great. So are you still going to give me a ride, Saturday?" I soon realized I needed more than just an opinion. I needed an in-depth critique of my work.

 

“After a little social media networking I ran into Phil. The critique I got from him was everything I wanted and more. Proper formatting and grammar aside, what a writer really wants to shine is the actually story. Phil was involved with the plot every step of the way. He gave me hints on how to better deliver the scenes.

 

“His critique really guided me through my own script with a more open-minded point of view. This led me to come up with better ideas and a greatly improved script. I would highly recommend his services to any and all screenwriters.”

 

Britt Reid – Georgia, USA

"Synced"

 

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“I decided to have the 'One Sheet Service' which proved extremely helpful. Phil gave clear pointers and an overall score. I am very new to writing screenplays and was nervous about receiving harsh feedback. Phil was polite, kind and constructive. I would feel very comfortable going back to Phil for assistance with any future projects.”

 

Nicky Jane Head – Hampshire, UK

“Honour & Obey”

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“I recommend Phil's script consulting services to anyone serious about putting their best material out there. From just having one coverage service done with Phil, I've managed to get such a giant perspective of what is expected of me as a writer for me to succeed and am so glad that someone like him exists.

 

“His feedback not only helped me with one script but all of my scripts moving forward. This is a guy that really takes the time to tell you what works and what doesn't, detail by detail. I can confidently say I will be the best screenwriter I can be because of his script services.

 

“I recommend Phil to anyone wanting to bring the very best out of every detail in their script. This man (amazing guy, by the way) takes the time to connect to your work so you can understand how you can make it better. And he is very open to talk to you as well; he is not just about the work, he is also a human being that cares.”

 

Antonio Ingram – North Carolina, USA

"The Tale of Denzel & Isabella"

 

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